Becoming Madame Mao” by Anchee Min
The author always starts out her sentences dry and describing something. The sentences don’t exactly pull you in but you keep reading because you want to know what happens next. She is a bit more descriptive in this passage when she describes the Qi village. The author’s sentences are rather short. She also uses two sentences when she just combined them into one, they all flow together nicely though, they aren't choppy.
The author always starts out her sentences dry and describing something. The sentences don’t exactly pull you in but you keep reading because you want to know what happens next. She is a bit more descriptive in this passage when she describes the Qi village. The author’s sentences are rather short. She also uses two sentences when she just combined them into one, they all flow together nicely though, they aren't choppy.